Sleeping Valor

DoaV Prologue Part 1: DoaV Prologue Part 2: And if you still have time there's the original prologue (completely different from the one above, it's going to end up being ...

o.O Dude. Calm down. You just got very agressive, and I don't think anyone here was accusing you of anything. You're taking our opinions far too seriously. You didn't specify ...

>.< It's not exactly an insult, but it's a bad use of the language. And, I don't know about how anyone else hears it used, but because of the way ...

It's fiction. And, as I noticed when reading it (*went on rants*), extremely stupid. Everything is extremely convenient and it all falls together so perfectly. As if it is entirely ...

I'd have to agree with Sureal. How do you know your friend is gay? Because of the way they dress? Because of the way they talk? If you've made the ...

Here's some icons!

I've been seeing some, but I don't know who makes them. Seriously, with the length of this thread we could start a Twilight Usergroup or something. =P As an aspiring ...

I am horrible at critiquing poetry because there really are no rules to poetry. BUT, since I read it, I am compelled to say something. I liked this poem, for ...

o.O 11 Stars?? When did that happen?? There were only 8 when I was here 20 minutes ago! *dies of confused happiness* XD Thanks for the critiques, again! I think ...

Thanks guys! ^_^ I appreciate your reviews. Actually, after Andy's near glowing review which said I had a very original idea (Andy gives me some of my most critical critiques ...

I'd say yes, Hitler is probably in Hell. I do believe in forgiveness and repenting, and so if he'd gotten down on his knees and begged forgiveness because he was ...

*le gasp!* A gold star from Andy?? :D! Such a kind review from one of my hardest critiques is quite the compliment! XD I'll definitely be looking into those issues, ...

Bonjour! Welcome to YWS. This is a great society, you should like it here. ^_^ I read the diary you posted, it's some great writing (distressing content aside). Do you ...

I think I saw 1 grammar error that I meant to point out, but it was supper time so now I have no clue where it went. =P This is ...

Hmm. Those are good points about Esten, thanks for pointing that out. =P I won't lie, I didn't put as much thought into this last half of the prologue as ...